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Class, Thurs, 4/16/2015

Proto-Drafts

Share your 500-word piece for today with the person next to you. After you read your partner’s essay, jot down some thoughts in response to these three questions:

  • What would you like to know more about the primary text?
  • What would you like to know more about the secondary text?
  • What would you like to know more about how the author is trying to connect the two?

Return the piece with your comments to your partner. Chat for a bit about what you noticed or about any questions you might have.

Rewriting, Chapters 2-3

  • Coming to terms: Re-presenting the work of another  writer
  • Forwarding: Thinking with another text, borrowing and extending its ideas and keywords. “As the writer suggests . . .”
  • Countering: Thinking against another text, noticing problems and gaps. “Yes, but . . .”

Leslie Hilmann, “I’m Trapped in a Paper Case of Emotion” [video]

  • When and how does Leslie come to terms with Carr and McLuhan?
  • When and how does she forward ideas from either writer?
  • In what ways does she counter either writer?

e2d1

  • Drafts
  • Conferences: Tues, 4/21, and Wed, 4/22

To Do

  1. Mon, 4/20, 11:00: Post e2d1 to your Dropbox folder.
  2. Tues, 4/21, or Wed, 4/22: Bring an annotated print-out of your e2d1 with you to your conference with me. Be ready to ask questions and try out ideas, as well as to hear my responses.
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